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8 year old Aliva Twister is next, her white dress, white bow on her head and long down hair it can make any judge vote yes for her. She is nervous, it will be her first time singing outside the school and home. The song she be singing is Tua from Jula De Palma, it took Aliva 1 week to remember all the lyrics. Aliva is called on the stage, she waited a few seconds but all the sudden her younger sister push her to the stage. Almost falling down Aliva made a quick recovery, Elena made a thumbs up to Aliva from the curtains, the same spot she was moments ago. Quickly Aliva took a deep breath and began singing. Many kids would have a hard time putting the voice in but not Aliva, she perfectly sang the song like she was the real Jula De Palma. The score is perfect 100, Aliva made it to the finals. She got off the stage and went to see Elena, “Well congrats on your win.” shyly said Elena. Pushing her older sister is never a good idea, however it worked so Elena is glad it happen.

“Why did you push me, I almost fell.” asked Aliva, “It's because you were slow, you can't be a superstar if you slow.” reply Elena. “Anyway let’s go back home, school starts tomorrow.” suggested Aliva, “Wait what about the contest, the finals are also tomorrow and you got the tickets.” worry Elena, knowing full well that Aliva might not return to join the finals. “I didn't do it to win, I did it because I wanted too thats all.” said Aliva, however deep down she does want to join the finals and beat everyone. Elena took 1 ticket in hopes to see a way into getting Aliva to join, the times they were to meet is after school. “Yes I knew it, the time is after school, thank goodness our hard work will be for nothing.” cheer Elena. “O.K ya the time is after school but the city is far away.” said Aliva, they travel to the city for 2 hours and barely made it to the contest. “Let's asked daddy if he will drive us here.” reply Elena, he is a push over for working hard but when it comes to his little girls he will do anything for them.

Aliva might as well do it, she wants to beat everyone after all, “O.K let’s asked daddy.” answered Aliva. Elena jump in joy for doing the impossible, if only getting a cookie from mom was that easy. They left the city minutes later and went home to mom cleaning the house with the noisy vacuum cleaner. She turn it off, “So how did everything go?” asked mom, “Aliva is in the finals and I helped” said Elena, her goal today is a cookie for that is the reason she push Aliva. “Thats very nice of you to do so.” smile mom, “Thats that mean I can get a cookie.” asked Elena. “No you have to do more than take her to town.” reply mom, Elena wanted the cookie but mom is right. “When daddy coming home, we need help on getting to the city.” said Aliva, her dad comes around 9pm or 8pm but other times 7pm or 5pm.

“He should be back home at… 8pm” reply mom, “Why you need help?”. They only own one car, it’s a nice car with air condition build in. “The finals is after school and the city is far away, so we need the car to drive to the city.” answered Aliva, she is mostly glad to ride the car as they rarely never get to ride it. “Oh thats right your homework, have you finish it?” asked mom, both girls forgot about it. “We forgot…” answer Elena, they ran to their room to finish it. “It's your fault we forgot.” said Aliva, “No I just umm… o.k it's my fault.” reply Elena. It's true, all the things that happen to get Aliva to win was all done with the help of her younger sister.

Morning rise with no rain in the forecast but they still have to bring it. “Hey a nice day, don't talk to strangers.” smile mom, the school wasn't far for them, it still worries her to see them walking alone. Anemia is what's keeping her from getting a job and picking up the kids from school. She is glad Aliva and Elena didn't get it, however they could have it without them even knowing it.

As the girls were walking down then saw a boy like the same age wearing a robe with wings on his back. They talk after he was long gone, “What do you think happen to him, he seems mad.” asked Elena. “I think he got pranked by the other boys.” answer Aliva, “Oh so thats what they were talking about.” said Elena, the boys in their school did set up a prank but Elena couldn't find out more because the bell ring. “I thought it was on the chalkboard, oh well.” reply Elena, she was certain that it was the chalkboard. On arriving to school the prank did happen on the chalkboard, it show a stick figure that represents the teacher fighting a slime monster. A huge line show what happen next, the stick figure got eaten by the slime monster.

“I don’t get it” said Aliva, “Me too.” reply Elena, they sat on their assign desk to wait for their friends. They only knew them for 2 years, it was also because of them that Aliva join the contest. Elena help convince them to get Aliva to join the contest, they wanted to form a rock band. Aliva the voice actor, Elena the drummer, and the other 2 will be guitar soloist. One big problem is that they don't have interments, so with Aliva help she could win the $1000 grand prize and buy the equipment. Vittoria show up first, she wearing a sweater in the middle of spring, her hair tie and striped skirt is the only thing keeping her cool.

“Vittoria, it's too hot outside why did you bring a sweater?” asked Elena, “My mom made me…” answer Vittoria. “She believes that it's going to be cold today but that was only for southend of Italy.” said Vittoria, her mother wasn't good with technology. Jemma ran in and sat next to Vittoria, “You too?!” Aliva is shocked to see almost everyone in sweaters, maybe it's a fashion thing. “It's not really a sweater, this is my lucky long sleeve shirt.” reply Jemma, she thinks it's lucky from the no homework, test redo, and one free extra cookie. “Oh thats right we be cheering you on to win.” said Vittoria, her dream of getting a guitar is almost real.

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Dark’s plan on killing the unknowns is simple but finding them is a whole lot harder without using his powers. To make matters worst he and invisible unknown are lost in Italy, “If i’m right there should be one unknown in each major country.” spoke Dark. In his time on earth he has encounter 6 unknowns and it keeps going. The only thing that is similar to everyone is where they are born, it is not possible for many unknowns to live in one planet. “You know, I really don’t care, let's summon up a dog to do the hard work for us.” suggested Dark. He rip apart space to have a dog come out from it. “Now as your master, find me a unknown, anyone is fine.” ask Dark, the dog obey as he started to track the air and ground. In no one the dog found 2, not far to where they are now. “Good it found something.” said Dark, they follow the dog to a talent show for young singers.

“Unknown of music, yes one of the most annoying unknowns is ready to be killed.” smile dark, in the past it was music that always stops Dark. The only way to counter it was to not hear it, however that only works if the music is sound and not a physical wind damaging attack. Dark is stopped by a man that is doing his job on not letting pets inside. “Sorry no dogs allowed.” answer the man in italian language. It’s then when Dark forgot something, he wouldn't be able to talk to everyone without his powers. However that didn't stop him from pass the door with his dog, he made the dog bark which then made the men is scare of the dog.

Dark is inside with other kids and parents, on the 4th row Aliva’s friends, Elena and her dad. The dog pointed his right paw to Elena, Dark thought it's a mistake but again he understands that there could be twins brothers or sisters unknowns. “Interesting, two unknowns.” quietly spoke Dark, he can’t mess this chance. As the singers perform, Dark made a trap with invisible unknown help, the plan is to fire invisible gun shots as well as rockets. Once the dog pointed to the unknown he will instantly fire even if other people get hurt or killed. Elena did not like the look at Dark face at the last back of the row, almost as if he could kill someone with the dog. “Hey look, Aliva is next” said Vittoria, Aliva walk on to the stage and started singing way before the dog pointed at her.

Unknowingly to Aliva, she made a battlefield with only Dark inside. “What?! so soon!” shouted Dark, it was a surprise to see her made a battlefield in her early life. Aliva open her eyes to find herself in a weird world that has flying notes in the sky, soft cut grass in a open field, and soft warm wind. A dream that almost made her cry but Dark stopped her daydreaming has he shouted “You! will not beat me!”. Dark rip the space around him to open a never ending missile attack, Aliva scream and cover her head. The missiles hit but Aliva is protected by a force field, Dark saw that it didn't work so he got out the same rock monster from Noui and Angel encounter. Aliva is confuse on what's going on but she feels like he mustn't win. Singing got her to this so she thought she would sing her way out.

As she sings a rock music, the whole field change again into a screaming army of fans, with dark clouds, and the land filled with ash as the stage is in the middle of a volcano. Dark stopped firing the rockets when it can no longer hit her, the rock monster is facing another monster that is 2 times bigger. “This is madness!” said Dark, he is being drag around by the fans from one place to another until he knew where they are talking him. The volcano as a offering to Aliva, the queen of rock. Dark did not wanted to be an offering she he flew high sky, he knows that there is a limit to how big a battlefield can be. It took 2 minutes but he got out and hit the wall that leads to an exit.

Invisible unknown left his post, all the stuff Dark made is gone. They made a quick getaway to the park, invisible unknown wonders what happen to Dark. On Aliva side she stopped singing when Dark flew to the sky but wanted to return home so she sing a song about returning home. In 2 mintues she return to the stage. Everyone cheer, they never heard such a song before, the song of her own work made everyone cry. All the judges agree that Aliva should be crowned the winner right then and there. A huge applause happen when she got her awards, they also announce 2th, 3th and 4th after the last contestant had a chance.

“I knew you were holding back, it sounded like… I don’t know… the master.” said Elena, she could cry again but is trying not to look sad at her sister. Aliva is confuse, so many things change but not much has been seen. As they were heading back back to the car another strange event happen, this time everything turn purplish write. “Oh no not again…” sigh Aliva as she waits for the boy to come. Noui appears saying “Wait hold on i’m not the bad guy.”, Aliva hold off on her singing. “The name is Noui, we are both unknowns.” explain Noui, “Unknowns? what's that?” ask Aliva. “In simple terms it's like being a superhero.” told Noui “You got them when you were born, thats where the old catchphrase ‘you were born to sing’ came from”.

Aliva does not know what to say other than, “Fine but what's going on?”. “Oh right the battlefield and Dark trying to kill you.” said Noui, he can't find anyway to trick her and she seen too much. “Dark is trying to rule the world by trying to kill any unknown that doesn't follow him.” explain Noui, “This thing you see it's a orb but the thing you made is a battlefield, the two are different but to make it easy to understand it gives a place to fight without damaging the whole city.” This made Aliva even want to ask more questions, “Why he wanted to take the world? why was I given this power?”. “Look I can't explain everything yet, you are too young to understand.” said Noui “When you're older i’ll explain why everything is like this o.k?”. The orb field drop as they agree to meet up again in 5 years at the same place outside.

“Hey Aliva stop daydreaming and let’s go!” ask Elena, Aliva looked around to see that she is back home with the same events. In one year became an instant celebrity in Italy then in 2 years she became the first international pop start with the help of social media. Elena has gotten to know Dark and his plan to take over the world. In rare times Elena use her own powers to scare Dark away but she doesn't know what power she has. Noui talk to Elena once in a tour and told the same thing about the events she seen. Both girls were still studying at school until the world tour, in which they had to leave their two friends behind.
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“Achooo” sneeze Noui, the winter cold is getting to him or worst it already got him. “Ssssoooo cold… maybe I should have left in spring.” shiver Noui, his life in the orphan home seems better by the minute. He didn't want to runaway but he can’t let Darkness be reborn. The only thing he hates about his power is the lack of even doing any magic. If Noui could just summon up a sun effect it will stop being cold but that's not his power. His power is just knowledge of everything, he knows all about the incident in the year 3000 and he knows why it happen. The best he can do now is try to stop this era from total war with each unknown. “I should really make a stone of light… oh wait… why use it if, light is not stronger than the clouds…” told Noui to himself, he stop to a near by alley and lit a can of garbage on fire. “Stone of fire… the only useful thing.” said Noui, the stones are a gift from unknowns of imagination, each stone is a small power from them. A thank you gift for teaching them how to use their power because unknown of technology mission is to always use their powers for what they called “science”.

Dark walk in the alley, “Hey Dark long time no see.” wave Noui. This made Dark confuse as to how he knows his name. “How did you know my name...wait are that guy who knows everything!” said Dark, he quickly pull out a sword. “Dark you are too hungry to fight and so i’m I.” respond Noui, he knows Dark won’t attack him, he knows all the fighting styles in existence. “I hate when you right…” answer Dark, he pull the sword away and sit next to Noui. “Let's steal something.” suggested Dark, he always steals everything even know he could just cheat his way to anything. “Seriously, of all the dark rulers of darkness why must you be the one that never uses its power like it's intended to be.” asked Noui. “Well that would be boring wouldn't it.” reply Dark, he then use his power to make the alley into a small house with them sitting next to a dinner table with elegant food. “See how boring that was, I need the excitement, the thrill of fear, the…” Dark stopped talking when he saw Noui eating.

Dark undo everything but Noui ate everything fast before it was all gone. “Thanks for the food but next time can you bring the lobster.” taunt Noui, “No! You didn't hear a single thing I said” answered Dark. “I already know it, the problem with you is that you can't do anything with your powers.” reply Noui, “What's wrong with my powers?!” asked Dark. “You only have limited copy and paste, so you can’t never make it 100%.” answered Noui, he knows Dark power has been cut drastically when the incident happen. The new world has made every unknown weak to something, all but one unknown remains unchanged. “My powers work unlike yours, who knows if your powers are broken, the information you have might not even be real.” reply Dark, this silence Noui as Dark could be right. New things can’t never be reported to him, the mear fact that flying cars don’t exist in the year 2000 N.B.E is evidence of that theory. “From the looks of your eyes I say that I’m right, well I like to keep talking to you but I have a world to rule.” said Dark, “Hey… why not use cheat your way to being a ruler.” smile Noui. Dark didn't answer and just walk away, he was just testing Noui to see if he knew anything about the unknowns death. Dark plan of ruling the world will start with the death of the unknowns, the only beings that can stop him.

Noui woke up early in the morning, still cold as always but not as cold as last night. He could not stand another night in the freezing cold. “Hey Sri you up!” shouted Noui, there was no reply she must be asleep in her world. “If I don’t hurry the in this people will find me and take me back to the orphan home.” said Noui, then he had an idea that seems impossible. He plans to teleport with the stones but to mix with them to create a magical ring that might send him to anyone. It was a long shot but he needs to get to the unknown time before Dark does. Noui suspects Dark of trying to kill all unknowns, trying to kill a unknown can lead to explosion that is better than Texas. “He has no clue what he’s doing, no clue at all.” said Noui, the stones were in place and everything is ready.

Stones lit up bright and the next thing Noui saw is trees, he has no clue why he was in the forest. “Uumm I did want to teleport to him so he must be somewhere near by.” said Noui, he got the stones then headed to the nearby city or road. After a little bit of walking Noui felt the ground shake but he knew it was Dark. The giant rock monster wasn’t hard to see, however it will cause many problems if people see it. Noui ran as close as he can and shouted “Dark stop!”, a sound of rumbling bushes made Noui turn around. It’s Dark with a New Bound Weapon that looks like a longsword but doesn't fool Noui eye’s. To a human eye it looks normal but with a unknown it looks like a sword with blue magical effects that looks too futuristic. “Really dark I thought you lost those summon stones.” said Noui, “Ya well I found them, so what you doing to do?” answered Dark.

An echo of scream flew by and made Noui worry. “Looks like my monster found him perfect!” Dark teleported, “Found who?” asked Noui. Too slow to see that Dark is on top of the giant head then commanded to punch the two boys next to the shallow stream. Noui didn’t have time to use a force field so he was better off fighting it. Using the rocks again in a unorganized matter he quickly teleported in the line of the punch. With little time Noui pull out his own N.B.W, two brass knuckles and punch the giant's fist. The N.B.W didn't stop the giant attack, it also damage it with spikes going everywhere on the giant's body. Noui brass knuckle has the ability to damage enemies with the most effective damage, like water vs fire, speed puch vs gun, and drill vs rock.

“That was close you guys o.k?” asked Noui, while Dark began to fall with his million of pieces rock monster. “Ya we o.k, how did you do that!?” asked Angel, Noui look at him for a very long and his friend to see which one is the unknown of time. Black hair, moles in his body and face, brown eyes, and same age has Noui. Nova didn't fit the requirements that only leads to Angel being the unknown of time. “Wow I can’t believe I found you this early in age.” said Noui, it was short lived as Dark activated his own force field, he strike fast but miss and only hit Nova. The strike send him flying to the top of the closes tree, he fell hard on his chest. Noui quickly went to Nova to see the damage, he was dead has expected but he can't let Angel know. Another thing is that the field will bring him back, like a save file. “Hes o.k just bruise, thats all.” lied Noui, he quickly teleported again next to Angel then saw Dark getting ready to strike with many longswords on his hand.



“Hey do you think you can fight him?” asked Noui, “No I don’t think so…” answered Angel. Now Noui had a problem as he knew that it takes time to even learn time. Noui’s brass knuckles can’t fight the swords, Dark is making it untargetable for Noui to pick the right damage and the brass knuckles can only handle two fights. Dark attack while Noui block it with his 2th N.B.W the shield. It can only handle so much damage until it breaks, “Hey think of something, anything that might sent him away!” said Noui. Angel couldn't think of anything, all he thought was Dark disappearing to somewhere else. So it did, Dark stop attacking when he saw magic rings surround him and he could not get rid of it. Dark disappear with the field, Nova is back alive on the spot where he was hit.

“O.k this is crazy, what is going on!” asked Angel, he saw Nova in one place then back to the spot where he was hit. “I should really explain but at the same time I don't want to…” respond Noui, if he tries to unlock unknown of time powers faster he would see more changes than what already happens. “My name is Noui, lets start with that.” said Noui, “My name is Angel and this is Nova.” answer Angel. “I thought I was dead, what happen to me when that guy hit me… it felt like superman’s punch.” asked Nova, “That guy was Dark, he's the evil one who wants to kill all the unknowns to become king of this world.” reply Noui. “So i’m a unknown?” asked Nova, “No he is.” Noui pointed at Angel but he didn't want to make his powers aware.

“What's a unknown and what was that purplish dark sky that I saw?” asked Angel, “The purplish dark sky is called ‘orbital ruggedly battle stage’ or orbs” answer Noui, “An unknown is… a super hero ya you can look at it that way.” Noui knew they were too young to understand why some times the powers someone holds can also lead to other things. “Cool that means Angel is a super hero!” said Nova, This made Noui worry about the two boys. If they never told what an unknown is it could bring more unknowns with better understanding of how to take down someone. Dark is the only one at the moment and he is hunting unknowns from misleading information, if more join it could bring disaster to the Earth. ”Hey what kind of powers does Angel have?” asked Nova, “I think it's better if i never told you.” answered Noui. The power of time will always be deathly, just having too much knowledge of space time will surely make unknown #0 appear.

“Aw come on, please tell us.” plead Nova, whatever Nova try Noui won’t answer. “You guys are already in big trouble for fishing, why don't I help you find rare bugs along the way and go off from there.” suggested Noui, the boys couldn't refuse the offer and they don’t want to lose another badge. Along the way the two boys were fighting on who won a bet about fantasy creatures. “I won because Noui is a elf” said Angel, “I won because Noui is not an elf and neither is that Dark guy.” reply Nova. However both were wrong, Noui is not an elf, he just has pointed ears. As for Dark he doesn't count as a fantasy creature or a human, if anyone ever study his body they would see a whole lot of unexplained things that could answer life. “Both of you are wrong and how I know this? Its because i’m the unknown of knowledge that's why.” smile Noui, the two boys stop fighting, they knew it's impossible to win against him.


After they got the rare bugs they needed from digging, Noui give Angel a rock that can help with his powers. “Its a rock…” said the boys, Noui knew that is a rock but he knew that courage is what Angel needed. “It's not just a rock, this rock will boost your powers.” lied Noui, “Go try it out on something.” Nova suggested the tree, nothing cool will happen or anything like Noui's brass knuckle. “Nothing happen…” Nova looked at Noui and can almost see the lie. Noui can understand why it didn't happen. Each unknown is different, so different unknown means different powers. “Just give him some time, he will get it.” answerd Noui, he is still worry about Angel’s power and him using it too early. “Oh ya you never told us what Angel power is” again Nova pushed that question to Noui, this time he will try everything to get Noui to talk. “Oh look your camp ground is on fire!” again Noui lie to the boys, they were shock and ran to the camp to help. Noui wish he could said goodbye but that wasn't possible.

As the two boys got to the campsite, there was no fire. The only fire were the campfire that is far away from trees and tents. They instantly knew Noui lied to them to get back to camp so he could escape the mountain of questions. Even after the rare bugs they found, they got in trouble for being 10 minutes late. “Hey wake up” said Nova, it’s 12pm on the battery clock as Nova tries to wake Angel up. “I’m up what…” woke sleepy Angel, not a night person he tries to go back to sleep. “No wake up.” sakes Nova, this time Angel is fully awake. “Fine what is it” asked Angel, he gets up and got out of his tent.

The two boys sat next to a cliff, they saw the sky, the moon, the stars, and the city below. “Cool, I never saw this place at night before” said Angel, he seen it at daytime but never at night time. “I was wondering, if you do become some kind of superhero…” paused Noui “Can you maybe make me your side-kick or something.” Angel didn't want to be a hero, all he wants is to build games as a living. “I’m not going to be a superhero, thats a whole lot of work and it's dangerous.” reply Angel “That giant rock monster nearly hit us, who knows what might happen to us if it hit.” Nova is glad because he does believe he died but he’s not dead, so he believes he is given a second chance.

“Alright then you win the bet for super powers.” said Nova, this came to a shock to Angel. They were always equal at everything they ever did. Now they are unequal, a apple to orange kind of relationship. “Well if you says so, it will still be fun if we continue without declaring a winner.” suggested Angel, that's when Nova got a idea for the next challenge. “O.k how about a list of what we think might and might not happen.” said Nova, “My list is Alien invasion, a old master unknown, a whale unknown, and underground people.” Angel’s list is different, he wanted Nova to win so he won't feel disappointed on himself. “My list is different dimension invasion, a crazy unknown, a lion unknown and a ghost city.” said Angel, they both think the list will never happen. If it was any other human they would also think the list is unreal.

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This is the first chapter and intro, I will release chapter 2 and 3 later on. If you wondering why its 0.1 and not full 1 it's because it follows the visual novel.

Feedback is greatly accepted.

Copyright 2015 Angel Moreno
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The Beginning

If you could wish for any power what would that be? I would have picked “the power of time and space”, others would have picked something simple from comic book heros. The Unknowns are individuals who have each and every power, it range from god to nothing. One can’t have the power without passing the requirements, rarely all 499 are born into one era. Until now everyone was place in set time zones where they fulfil the master’s duty but one time zone change everything.

It was the year 3000, a indestructible black hole has wrap 90% of all space. The two Unknowns in that era is unable to stop it, fighting with each other never helped change anything. Earth being the only safe place for 1 year had many lifeforms leaving and moving into another dimension. Unable to accept defeat the time unknown used a forbidden power and traveled back to the beginning where the black hole was made, it fail. However the fail attempt was not wasted, it brought new hope that ultimately change every unknown.

This story starts in the year 2005 NewBoundEra, the new time zone where all 499 are born without the master’s duty.



Chapter: 0.1 - The one who calls himself Dark

Angel at the park is waiting for Nova to show up. It is a hot sunny day and the shave not helping with the rising temperature. “I’m lucky that I live close by or I would have sweat a lot” said Angel, has pointed his head up on the sky, only to be blocked by the tree’s leaves. Then came the sound of footsteps, Angel believing is Nova trying to win the scare bet. “I hear you Nova.” said Angel but it wasn't Nova, once he stopped looking at the sky he saw another boy. He has wings, a robe, hair black, and maybe the same age has Angel.

“I’m not Nova it's me Dark, your rival for many years!” said the boy in a demanding way. “O.K…” said Angel unable to understand the boy action or such. The boy pulled out a magical ring around his hand then started shooting straight into Angel. As the dust clear Angel cough from the dust trying to get it away from him, once it clear the boy saw the shot mark but it made a circle. “Your force field won't keep you alive for long!” said the boy, suddenly continue to shoot again but Angel move behind the tree. “Can we talk about this…” said Angel has the tree is being shot, the boy didn’t reply but kelp on shooting.

The sound of shots stopped, Angel looked behind him and saw that the boy was building a huge energy shot. Thats when Angel ducked low and covered his head, just in case the tree ever fell on him. Two things happen when it fired, the first was the energy shot turn into a laser and the tree did fall but only to the boy. “Ahh!” said the boy, he wasn’t hurt but he was forced to stop shooting or else he get the tree on fire. This give Angel the time to run away, he got on his bike, then ran like the wind. Angel saw Nova who was clueless about the boy with magical powers. “Nova there's a boy who calls himself dark and he shoots magic bullets like on t.v!” said Angel; The boy appear between them. Now he has two magic rings in his hand, each pointed at them.

A force field was activated that turn everything into purplish write and the sky dark. “What?! how?!” said the boy, when Angel stopped sightseeing he knowist that Nova is gone from his bike. “What did you do to Nova.” said Angel but the boy didn't answer and disappear, that's when the whole park turn back to normal colors. “Hey what boy with magic stuff?” said Nova who is confused about Angel’s story. “Did you not see him? he was here and turn everything purplish write and the sky dark.” said Angel but Nova does not get it or will ever get it. “Lets just drop it, I still have a bet to win after all.” said Angel, however his feeling are telling him that Dark is near by. “The name’s Dark and don’t you forget.” said the mysterious voice, when Angel ask Nova he did not hear any voices.

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Dark still in the force field is still trying to find the owner, because of him he lost his chance to kill Angel the time unknown. “The name’s Dark and don’t you forget.” said Dark has he send a message to Angel in hopes to stir fear in him. “Thats so lame.” said another voice from the sky but Dark knew who trap him. “Unknown of dimensions show yourself, only you could pull of that trick.” said Dark; suddenly she appear far from Dark. “Seech I have a name you know, its Sri how hard is it to forget?!” said Sri, she’s angry with Dark over trying to kill someone. Dark had this coming to him but he has an advantage with unknown the invisible. He give the clear and Dark teleported to a nearby rock. “wait what?!” said Sri, she then heard the bomb that is right next to her. Sri had no problems teleporting it to space. “Thats even more lame.” said Sri who is becoming very bored with Dark tricks. “Fine! I know how you like yard so catch!” said Dark but the yard didn't work, maybe Xat people are not cats. “You honestly believe that i’m a cat!” shouted Sri; “Just because I have claws or my tail?! Huang thats it!”. Sri teleported Dark and the invisible unknown to the sea with sharks… hundreds of sharks.

“Stop panicking, they don't eat humans and you're invisible!” said Dark; Sri appear again just to see them struggling to swim. Dark used his powers to walk on water, next he used his power to help invisible unknown do the same thing. “Aww your no fun, i’m leaving.” said Sri; all at once she drop the force field then head it home. Meanwhile Dark and invisible unknown were stuck on the sea for 2 days. “I swear if i ever get my chance i’ll throw her at sea too.” said Dark; invisible unknown is tired of ark rant about messing things up. He is wondering how unknown 300, the one with cheat power, can lose to a unknown with teleportation. “Hold it! Look down there” said Dark; underneath was a ruin ship with a chest. “Yes! the chest with all my summons!” said Dark, “You know what this means?! Our way to get out of here!” In the past Dark lost his summons has he died, he thought he was never going to get them back.

It didn't take long to get them with his cheating powers he made the chest come to him. Once Dark open it he saw all the rock summons still looking the same from 1700s. Next Dark open a rip in the air then made all the rocks move to the rip. Lastly he stick his hand in the rip and got out a red rock. “Come to me bird!” said Dark; a giant bird appear out from another rip in the sky. “It looks like a parrot.” said invisible unknown but Dark didn't pay any attention has he was too busy building a land for it. “Now hurry along I want to make it to free pancake day.” said Dark; “Why didn’t we just summon the bird without the rocks…” said Invisible. “Don’t question my power! everyone has rules that we hate.” said Dark; it was true since invisible unknown hates being invisible. Everything he touch will become invisible, even the voice is invisible but Dark is the only one who can hear him.

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This is the first chapter and intro, I will release chapter 2 and 3 later on. If you wondering why its 0.1 and not full 1 it's because it follows the visual novel.

Feedback is greatly accepted.

Copyright 2015 Angel Moreno
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The Beginning

If you could wish for any power what would that be? I would have picked “the power of time and space”, others would have picked something simple from comic book heros. The Unknowns are individuals who have each and every power, it range from god to nothing. One can’t have the power without passing the requirements, rarely all 499 are born into one era. Until now everyone was place in set time zones where they fulfil the master’s duty but one time zone change everything.

It was the year 3000, a indestructible black hole has wrap 90% of all space. The two Unknowns in that era is unable to stop it, fighting with each other never helped change anything. Earth being the only safe place for 1 year had many lifeforms leaving and moving into another dimension. Unable to accept defeat the time unknown used a forbidden power and traveled back to the beginning where the black hole was made, it fail. However the fail attempt was not wasted, it brought new hope that ultimately change every unknown.

This story starts in the year 2005 NewBoundEra, the new time zone where all 499 are born without the master’s duty.


Chapter: 0.1 - The one who calls himself Dark

Angel at the park is waiting for Nova to show up. It is a hot sunny day and the shave not helping with the rising temperature. “I’m lucky that I live close by or I would have sweat a lot” said Angel, has pointed his head up on the sky, only to be blocked by the tree’s leaves. Then came the sound of footsteps, Angel believing is Nova trying to win the scare bet. “I hear you Nova.” said Angel but it wasn't Nova, once he stopped looking at the sky he saw another boy. He has wings, a robe, hair black, and maybe the same age has Angel.

“I’m not Nova it's me Dark, your rival for many years!” said the boy in a demanding way. “O.K…” said Angel unable to understand the boy action or such. The boy pulled out a magical ring around his hand then started shooting straight into Angel. As the dust clear Angel cough from the dust trying to get it away from him, once it clear the boy saw the shot mark but it made a circle. “Your force field won't keep you alive for long!” said the boy, suddenly continue to shoot again but Angel move behind the tree. “Can we talk about this…” said Angel has the tree is being shot, the boy didn’t reply but kelp on shooting.

The sound of shots stopped, Angel looked behind him and saw that the boy was building a huge energy shot. Thats when Angel ducked low and covered his head, just in case the tree ever fell on him. Two things happen when it fired, the first was the energy shot turn into a laser and the tree did fall but only to the boy. “Ahh!” said the boy, he wasn’t hurt but he was forced to stop shooting or else he get the tree on fire. This give Angel the time to run away, he got on his bike, then ran like the wind. Angel saw Nova who was clueless about the boy with magical powers. “Nova there's a boy who calls himself dark and he shoots magic bullets like on t.v!” said Angel; The boy appear between them. Now he has two magic rings in his hand, each pointed at them.

A force field was activated that turn everything into purplish write and the sky dark. “What?! how?!” said the boy, when Angel stopped sightseeing he knowist that Nova is gone from his bike. “What did you do to Nova.” said Angel but the boy didn't answer and disappear, that's when the whole park turn back to normal colors. “Hey what boy with magic stuff?” said Nova who is confused about Angel’s story. “Did you not see him? he was here and turn everything purplish write and the sky dark.” said Angel but Nova does not get it or will ever get it. “Lets just drop it, I still have a bet to win after all.” said Angel, however his feeling are telling him that Dark is near by. “The name’s Dark and don’t you forget.” said the mysterious voice, when Angel ask Nova he did not hear any voices.

*  *  *  *

Dark still in the force field is still trying to find the owner, because of him he lost his chance to kill Angel the time unknown. “The name’s Dark and don’t you forget.” said Dark has he send a message to Angel in hopes to stir fear in him. “Thats so lame.” said another voice from the sky but Dark knew who trap him. “Unknown of dimensions show yourself, only you could pull of that trick.” said Dark; suddenly she appear far from Dark. “Seech I have a name you know, its Sri how hard is it to forget?!” said Sri, she’s angry with Dark over trying to kill someone. Dark had this coming to him but he has an advantage with unknown the invisible. He give the clear and Dark teleported to a nearby rock. “wait what?!” said Sri, she then heard the bomb that is right next to her. Sri had no problems teleporting it to space. “Thats even more lame.” said Sri who is becoming very bored with Dark tricks. “Fine! I know how you like yard so catch!” said Dark but the yard didn't work, maybe Xat people are not cats. “You honestly believe that i’m a cat!” shouted Sri; “Just because I have claws or my tail?! Huang thats it!”. Sri teleported Dark and the invisible unknown to the sea with sharks… hundreds of sharks.

“Stop panicking, they don't eat humans and you're invisible!” said Dark; Sri appear again just to see them struggling to swim. Dark used his powers to walk on water, next he used his power to help invisible unknown do the same thing. “Aww your no fun, i’m leaving.” said Sri; all at once she drop the force field then head it home. Meanwhile Dark and invisible unknown were stuck on the sea for 2 days. “I swear if i ever get my chance i’ll throw her at sea too.” said Dark; invisible unknown is tired of ark rant about messing things up. He is wondering how unknown 300, the one with cheat power, can lose to a unknown with teleportation. “Hold it! Look down there” said Dark; underneath was a ruin ship with a chest. “Yes! the chest with all my summons!” said Dark, “You know what this means?! Our way to get out of here!” In the past Dark lost his summons has he died, he thought he was never going to get them back.

It didn't take long to get them with his cheating powers he made the chest come to him. Once Dark open it he saw all the rock summons still looking the same from 1700s. Next Dark open a rip in the air then made all the rocks move to the rip. Lastly he stick his hand in the rip and got out a red rock. “Come to me bird!” said Dark; a giant bird appear out from another rip in the sky. “It looks like a parrot.” said invisible unknown but Dark didn't pay any attention has he was too busy building a land for it. “Now hurry along I want to make it to free pancake day.” said Dark; “Why didn’t we just summon the bird without the rocks…” said Invisible. “Don’t question my power! everyone has rules that we hate.” said Dark; it was true since invisible unknown hates being invisible. Everything he touch will become invisible, even the voice is invisible but Dark is the only one who can hear him.

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This is the intro and chapter 1, I will release chapter 2 later on. If you wondering why its 0.1 and not full number 1 it goes with the visual novel, the huge difference in the book is that there is better explained then the visual novel.

Feedback is greatly supported.
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